Working on

I thought that i could have corrected many careless mistakes if i had only taken my time and not rushed. I learned to reread my work and better organize my ideas before submitting a paper

I did well:

• incorperating qoutes
• formulating ideas 

I need to work on:

•  taking my time a checking over my work.
•  MLA format.
• Developing my ideas 
• Formulating more effective and complete sentences 

Hamlet essay

I believe that i could improve in every aspect of my writting. Specifically i need to work on proof reading my essay more carefully before submitting my essay to my teacher. I believe that i could work on making more specific analizations and statements. I also think i could make better claims with a more structured essay. I also am not great at abiding by MLA format. I believe that i made some good points in my essay but there is a lot of room for improvement